i feel sorry for the critics
satisfaction escapes them
they cannot love
save for that girl from his childhood
or that movie he saw when he was twelve
they cannot appreciate
except for things
that take more thought
than they are worth
one critic likes the use of synecdoche
in act two
it illuminates the characters
inherent subservience
he thinks
another critic thinks its just
a trick stolen from dickens
nothing special
they forget how to love
what they spend their life doing














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